1/ Sandwiches
Hovering between the azure sky and the aqua-blue sea, he felt trapped. Blue surrounded him, threatening to engulf him in one gulp. He was overwhelmed by it all – there was no other colour, no other escape he could find. The world seemed so big, and he was just that one bird, sandwiched between the sky and sea.
2/ Brown Coffee
In the coffeehouse, warmth greeted her and reached into her heart. The waiter nodded. He’d bring her coffee soon.
She picked it up. The smooth, brown finishing made her smile.
Then, she pulled the trigger. The waiter fell with the coffee. The highest heat could not melt her heart, what was a cup of coffee?
3/ “Make a wish and place it in your heart. Anything you want, everything you want”
That floaty feeling it felt, it knew it wouldn’t last. It had come from the heart of a girl, who was growing up too fast. That girl had once believed that people would never leave. But now that girl grew old, she thought it was time to let go.
So she did. It disappeared, forever.
adelle(:
1 comment:
#1 was a hit, good buildup with ample description and a cool concept.
#2 and #3 didn't make much sense to me. Why did the woman shoot the waiter? Is she psycho? I think you were hinting at some form of melancholy or something but you have to make it more obvious. Same goes for the last story, you have to make your intentions clearer.
But still, kudos to #1, i liked it very much.
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