True Love
He plunged on deeper, further and faster while she spiraled down towards an unavoidable end. She seemed so lithe, her delicate features glowing with a green mystical sheen. Friction was completely non-existent between them. There was only love, as pure and eternal as that slight breeze carrying a slight leaf to far-flung corners of the world. (55 words)
Infatuation
His mesmerizing eyes were sparkling blue; exquisitely sculptured lips lusciously tempting and perfectly positioned nose a stunning piece of art. He seemed like Don Juan, seductively tantalizing. I yearned to take him home and make him mine. The opportunity finally arrived when a half price discount tag was gracefully added to the striking marble statue. (55 words)
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2 comments:
You seem to employ description as your fundamental story and you do it quite well. Good job!
Min Yee
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